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Saturday, August 8th, 2009
11:49 pm - Crap

The city streets resembled the few customers who had already braved the cold to call on him at his store in the early hours of the morning. To much drink and merriment had left a heavy mark this side of the fifth ring. The streets were lined with bodies, most of them still warm. Someone had been kind enough to toss rough dirty blankets over some of the revelers during the night. Most of them exhaled white plumes, the ones who didn't would be picked up when state workers arrived to clear the streets.


Sebastien did his best to steer clear of them all. His foothold in the city was tenuous at best and while he may have the respect of the herdsmen and menial workers in the bottom three the state workers wouldn't think twice about picking up a foreigner, especially one as scrappy looking as him.


The market was nearly empty. Only merchants lined the cobbled road. A few, familiar, called out. Sebastien sedately greeted each, stopping to purchase a loaf of flat bread and two bruised coin fruits as he passed through.


Near the end of the way he found the widow, unmarked by the rest of the city's lethargy. She smiled at him from her stool. No crates or flat mats held her wares. A simple bag hung over her shoulder and marked her as a very specific type of merchant.


You late.” She addressed him in clipped northern, her wizened face crinkling around the edges. Sebastien grinned sheepishly.


I've a business to run as well Auntie.


No drink juice yesterday night?


Ah, then how would I pay you this morning?” He held out a thin purse, its leather blackened from use. The old woman counted the coin carefully.


You miss one. Good pay twice.” She pocketed the coin and pulled out a bundle wrapped in ratty cloth. His name had been written across the front in careful eastern script.


He accepted the package and clutched it tight to his breast. The pages inside had cost him every spare penny he had made this last week. Usually it wouldn't have been such a burden but the weeks after the carnival had been announced had been sparse for all the merchants.


Now that it had arrived perhaps things could return to normal soon.


The shop was empty besides his young sour faced apprentice. The boy looked up from his seat near the door when he entered and accepted one of the bruised fruits before Sebastien released him for the day, breathing a sigh of relief when the door closed behind him.


Agrin was a good boy, but unsuited to working with customers. Luckily he would be old enough to learn a trade soon, leaving Sebastien to find a new apprentice. This one would be based on merit.


He unwrapped the stack of rough pulp papers and took a seat against the wall, setting them aside with aplomb. He would have time for the story after. There was likely to be very little interruption after the breakfast hour and he should use the time to seed some of the more complicated beads in his collection.


Each bead, as it had been explained to him when he had first arrived in Oragime, was a container created specifically for use by a Ilumanie. The Ilumanie were essentially healers who worked their magic without contact with a body. Sebastien etched each bead with pictographs known as Marks.


The beads were a popular alternative to visiting the clinics that dotted the inner rings. They were cheaper and could be bought in advance but their potency was impacted by the type and condition of the bead as well as the skill of its crafter.


Sebastien had inherited the shop from Aar, the woman who had taken him from the street and given him a place in her home. At her knee he had learned the few marks passed down to her from her own father. Marks were jeliously guarded by those who knew them. Men and women who worked in the clinics were contracted for life and lived under constant guard within the compound itself. They were not allowed to bind or reproduce. Their entire lives were devoted to their craft. Others, like Aar and himself lived off the few marks passed down to them through generations of Ilumanie.


Marks were more then simple sketches they were combinations of sounds and pictographs that created something more. Something lost long before the Great Kingdom split. With marks a man could create and kill, raise crops and ward off ill wishers. It was said in the east that some of the oldest familys still carefully guarded marks that allowed them to communicate with the dead.


Sebastien had inherited a mishmash of common marks for healing cuts and bruises and a few less common agricultural and domestic marks that kept him in business during the leanest months. Aar had also handed down a fistful of dubious marks that had been added to the pile by her own grandfather, a 'foot soldier' in his youth for one of the five gangs that kept the peace in the lower three.


The bead he wished to seed now would take several hours worth of work. The material alone, a bulb of processed ore no larger then his thumb nail had cost nearly a weeks profit but when it sold would quadruple his investment.


If he could find a buyer.


Sebastien laid his tools out on the bench and pinched the knob of precious metal between his fingers and brought it close to his face. Every flaw would effect his mark, every lump and divot would need to be accounted for. Healing was a precise art but held nothing on Modification. The mark he planned to seed would provide its user with unusually sharp vision over distances. Unlike most seeds it would not be destroyed in use and would instead be implanted under the skin, a dangerous technique very seldom practiced. If his mark was off the seed could cause irreparable damage.


Luckily there was little chance of that, as he would have to spend hours etching it into the bead to wear the troughs deep enough before he could seed the mark. He fixed the bead into a small vice rooted into the table and took up a silver gray needle mounted into a cylinder of wood and began his work.


As it turned out his skills were to be in high demand. He was interrupted twice before noon and three more times before he pulled the heavy veil over his doorway that hid the interior from view. The sun was setting over the metropolis but instead of stilling the city was coming to life. People poured outwards from the rings, trickling into the makeshift tents and half formed fairways of the carnival.

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Saturday, June 27th, 2009
8:24 am - 10 minutes
No editing, no finishing, ten minutes.

Aael parted his fingers slowly until just enough light filtered into his cupped hands to make the creature squirm.

“Hey!” Someone called over his shoulder, “Aael's got one!” A crowd gathered quickly, excitedly demanding he show them.

“He can't show you you dummy! She'd die!”

“How do you know its a girl,” Daen charged. Aael hunched protectivly over his fists, glaring at the larger boy.

“Because it is,” the hot tempered blond snarled back.

Aael barked at both of them. “It doesn't matter anyways.”

“Show us then.”

He rolled his eyes as the rest of the group took up the older boy's demand. The crowd began to jostle, banging into each other trying to get a look.

“Fine!” Aael cried, tossing a defensive elbow towards Cae's brother, who was trying to spin him around by his shoulder.

“You can't just show them! She'll die!”

“I know that,” Aael, who had had enough from both sides spat. “We'll take her to Daené.”

“Not that old coot.” Daen complained, “He'll never let us have any fun.”

It took several seconds, but Cae gasped. “You pervert!”

“What,” Daen smirked “Just because your to young to use your's-” The taunt sputtered to a halt as Cae smashed into the older boy, dropping both of them sideways into the widow's velvet patch. Aael didn't stay to watch the fight.

Daené's cottage lay in the wooded area outside the settlement, like the rest of the elders. Unlike the rest of them, Daené still accepted visitors. Aael pushed his way past the mat that functioned as a door and slid into the main room of the elderly man's house.

“Daené?” he called softly, lifting his balled hands to wave away the ticklish smoke curling around his out sized nose. The creature between them protested violently, beating its small body into the cracks of his fingers.

“Daené?”

There was silence, then a long creak from the b ack of the room.

“Ah! Come in,” Daené cracked. The heavy smoked shifted as somewhere the older man shifted.

Aael shuffled carefully around wooden boxes and tables that loomed out of the smoke like craggy rocks. A grunt and a shuffle, closer now, and the room exploadeded in light. Daené chirped happly.

Aael hid his face in his arms, squeezing the creature tight. The smoke rushed past, he could feel it like water on his skin as it fled. Another burst of sunlight joined the first.


current mood: tired

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Tuesday, February 24th, 2009
8:47 am - Writing
Prompt:

The story ends in a graveyard. The story takes place in the late morning. The story must involve a bag in it. During the story, a character is attacked.

This gentleman reminds you of a billowing sandstorm. He has hooded eyes the color of turquoises. He is middle eastern. He has a feminine build. His skin is light-colored. He has a small mouth and long-fingered hands. He is poor/homeless.


Closer, this time. One hour, nothing fancy.

Need coffee.



Akin held the paper sack close to his chest, hidden inside the folds of his natty coat. The raspy breathing of his companions echoed in the alleyway, reminding him that he should be asleep. The contents of the bag, however, would not allow his conscious to rest.

He fingered the circlet though the sack, where constant worrying had worn it to a supple leather texture. The empty setting that crowned the ring ripped at the paper, exposing two of the golden tongs.

Akin shoved the bag further into his coat, drawing his hands away and flapping them in the cold air. He would have to do something about it, before someone found out. Daylight was some time off still and the oily warm stench of the others flooded the still air. The city around them was dead. It was unlikely he would find a better chance then the present.

He head his breath until he was out of the alley, each shuffling step loud in his own ears. His escape was uncontentested, the few yellow eyes that peered out from the ragged remnants of blankets and tarps tracked him only long enough to make sure he bypassed them and whatever trinkets they kept. Even the mutts slept, their short muzzles poking out from the scattered blankets where their masters lay.

The streets were as empty as the businesses that bordered them. He fled them as swiftly as he had left the assortment of bodies he called home. The ring, the reason for his venturing out at all was almost forgotten in the sensation of flight.

Akin was quick to correct his path when he remembered. The graveyard was not far away, hidden behind a row of primly kept trees that obscured the crumbling angels and worn blocks of stone that marked the final resting places of so many of his well to do countryman. He skirted the markers, footsteps hasty on the tar walkway that encircled them. The markers began to shrink, here and there they were reduced to dark plaques no larger then a textbook. He kept walking until they disappeared entirely, replaced by small metal crosses hammered into the ground.

He stopped next to the first and gazed over the potters field. A sea of crosses, each one as empty as the last. Akin drew a deep breath and let it out slowly. He picked one near the end and wove his way ward it. There was no way of knowing which grave he was looking for. Akin wasn't even sure if they had buried him with the others last Friday or if his body was still in the morgue, waiting for next month when they would inter another black van of John Does.

The grave was as freshly turned as the two on either side of it. Akin tore the paper sack away and took his first real look at the trinket pinched between his fingers. It's empty setting returned his gaze reproachfully.

Akin shivered and glanced away, wondering what had made him salvage such a ghastly token.

He had originally thought he might sell it, and the old man certainly wasn't using it anymore. His wife had died decades ago, around the time Akin himself was born. But he soon found the taboo to much to bear. A jacket was nothing, a scarf, money, even clothing. There were very few things one wouldn't be stripped of after death.

But Akin had arrived late that night. When he heard about Jason the he was already been cold. He had knelled over the old man, eyes drinking in the Union tattoo uncovered by the heavy green jacket he had worn. Jason had known better then to hope for the jacket, but even the familiar smudged glasses had been plucked from his nose.

The gold was dented, crushed by the weight of years and memories and had rested in the old mans pocket for nearly thirty years. Akin had planned to sell it, but the man at the pawn store had refused to pay him for the gold. Unable to get rid of it the weight of began to drag him down, until it was all he could think of.

Akin scuffed at the edge of the sod, prying up a corner of the earth and pressed the ring into the dirt. There were tragidys even a body as tortured as his own could not bear and no matter how broken his body, his soul, tarnished as it was still remained intact.

current mood: sleepy

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Monday, February 23rd, 2009
11:08 pm - Writing
I've decided to write more. I've never been much of a writer. I want to be a writer, but there are obviously a few steps between wanting and being. So, I got a prompt, which has been deleted but went something like:

Two clerks in japan. Viruses. Something something...

And here is what I came up with. I only got part of it in there. Not really a surprise. It took me forever to write just this. One hour limit.



The last yellow rays of sunlight were obscured by the hills that crested over the horizon. Wong lay down the wooden spatula he'd drafted to pry the lid off a large metal bucket of peanut butter and wiped his brow.

A chubby, freckle faced man surveyed the shelves bolted to the thin corrugated metal walls. Bottles of perfume, bricks of dried noodles and tins of boneless fish lined the walls. Scattered amongst them were the less costly staples of life in the sprawling shanty town. Salt, oil, flour, things they could no longer produce for themselves or cultivate in the moist earth around their homes.

The little store was one of three inside the settlement and a favorite among those who could afford to patronize it. The prices were fair, even if it wasn't as well stocked as the other two, and Wong's partner William had grown up in the caravan that made up a large part of the town.

“I hear Dinah asked you over for dinner again this Sunday.”

Wong wrinkled his flat nose, drawing a hearty chuckle from William.

“She likes you. When are you going to make an honest woman out of her?”

“She is to young,” Wong complained, prying the lid off the container with his fingers.

“Maybe you are too old. You aren't getting any younger you know.”

“She is thirteen!”

“She will grow.” he said with a lecherous grin, thumping his friend on the back. “In more ways then one. You boy's like that don't you?” He cupped his hands infront of his chest and jiggled them up and down. “Tits?”

Wong flushed. William seemed to take great joy in this reaction. He tossed his head back and laughed.

“Then what is there to worry about? Marry the girl, she will make you a good wife.” William produced a long handled knife and begin to slice into a lump of thick potato bread as he lectured. Wong listened as he extolled the virtues of his taking a wife. Not only for Wong, but himself and the store as well. He had just got to the part where Wong's fictional wife was taking care of the guineas they raised for meat when he was interrupted by a shadow in the window carved into the wall.

“William!”

William glanced up from his bread, toothy, open grin already in place. He dropped the knife on the scared wooden table and greeted the man with an exuberant blow to the shoulder that made Wong wince.

“Rodney!”

Wong blacked out the conversation after that, retrieving the knife and picking up where William had left off. He was glad for the interruption, because nothing short of a customer could get him off that particular topic.

The bread became sandwiches smeared with peanut butter. Wong stacked them on a chipped plastic dish and fished several of the large pickled eggs William was so fond of from the jar he kept on top of the crowded table. Williams nose twitched appreciatively.

Wong surveyed his small shop, his best friend and the herd of shrieking guineas at his feet with a small smile and wondered where exactly William thought a wife would fit in.

current mood: cranky

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Tuesday, February 10th, 2009
11:08 am - Crossover
Dirty, I know.

I've never been much for crossovers, although I am quite fond of the Bateman/Nurse!Joker group. Which only leads into this. Bateman/Percy Weasley. I would love to see one.

Just one.

Maybe seven.

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Saturday, September 20th, 2008
4:30 am - Rare
So,

I heart, big old bloody fuckin' heart, The Breakfast club. Brian/Andy or Brian/Bender.

Heart.

And truly, there is nothing much out for me, a few WONDERFUL stories, and nothing else.

Please me.

Give me.

Please.

Yours,
Onoicky

PS: I'll trade, your fandom for mine. Dead serious here. I wonder if there is an asylum for this.

current mood: hopeful

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